My story Idea

Jul. 18, 2005 @ 11:06 AM
# 1
Bane KingRank 3: Lieutenant General (1,285 Points) Bane King

I get these ideas after smoking but I forget before I can write anything
Lucky for me this one has stuck with me.

The character (male/female?) has discovered the "forbidden library? and it linked to the lost city of Atlantis. The library from the outside is designed like a giant white roman building with the classic pillars. The library at the back of the city which is lit like it has sunlight but the source isn?t visible. The city homes are lined next to each other without space between them (like in an old Europe city). The buildings are stone looking with large wooden doors. The doors won?t open but it?s not because they are locked. The city is surrounded by a cave like dome without an entrance/exit. I want to say there is a palace but I haven?t really thought much about that yet.

That?s about all I?ve come up with. I haven?t decided what how the character travels between the world to Atlantis yet.


Tell me what you think.
Does it suck?

Edited by Bane King on Jul. 18, 2005 @ 11:11 AM

Jul. 18, 2005 @ 4:43 PM
# 2
DeathDealerRank 10: Master Sergeant (55 Points) DeathDealer

I wont say it sucks,but you pretty much have nothing...
smoke another fatty

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